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CommentsIt's lovely. You may not be a ballet expert but their positions and expressions really give the feeling to it ^_^ Just one thing though, they seem less on ballet and more on maybe interpretative or some other dance form.
I think it's just the ballet student in me but Ahiru's posture isn't right, even if they're in mid-dance, or something ._. But besides that it's amazing ^_^ Great job on the coloring, and I like how Fakir turned out. -- Be part of my elemental story! Free sketch of your character! [link] In my Philippine mythological webcomic "Halimaw", be any being you choose! Be in my webcomic! [link] very nice work on this
-- "GO HOME AND SHAVE YOUR GIANT HEAD OF SMELL WITH YOUR BAD SELF!" --Invader Zim Thank you!
Yeah, my expressions and anatomy are improving these days, but I'm still weak (and new) at drawing actual ballet poses. (It is intended to be mid-dance/ However Thank you for the critique! -- "The prince is very brave, to love a unicorn. A cat can appreciate valiant absurdity." Peter S. Beagle OH - ~Club-Tutu - [link] Yeah, well it's just me XD I used to have the job of fixing the kids' posture back when I took ballet. That's one of the reasons I love PT and one of the reasons I'm noticing Ahiru's knees O_o (bent)
Cuz ballerinas basically have to keep their posture at all times. But that's all; I think that'll win XD Oh, and could you consider the note I sent to the club? Only if it's okay. If not, that's okay too. -- Be part of my elemental story! Free sketch of your character! [link] In my Philippine mythological webcomic "Halimaw", be any being you choose! Be in my webcomic! [link] I love how you feel so toyed with. Fakir looks so bad arse its not even funny.
-- "...art can teach without at all ceasing to be art." ~C.S. Lewis "Human beings, all over the earth, have this curious idea that they ought to behave in a certain way, and can't really get rid of it."~C.S. Lewis I'm not a pothead, I'm too creative. argh, i don't know this story!!!! was it written recently?
In anycase... -- "Everyone has it within his power to say, 'This I am today; that I will be tomorrow.' The wish, however, must be implemented by deeds." -Louis L'Amour, The Walking Drum This is absolutely stunning. I love the colors that you picked, and these three look REALLY good in the Hindu style costumes. I especially love Fakir's face, he looks so desperate and sad at the same time. Any chance I could beg a detail shot of it from you?
I love the body art, too. The shading and the colors . . . . *happy sigh* Intense! Yes, which is fabulous, except it looks a little non-ballet like with Fakir and Ahiru. They speak interpretive dance but not ballet. I can see how you tried to get Ahiru to mold into a ballet position, but Fakir seems more like he's about to go into a charge (paso doble like or something). Maybe if he was jumping with a leg split it may appear more like a ballet pose. Ahiru's body just doesn't seem right. She looks like she's doing a bit of the cancan with the high leg she's got going there.
The colours and detail impress me the most. And those folds! Aiyaiyai!! <3 They are splendid! I have to say this is your most impressive fold work I have seen yet! And overall this is one of my favourites in your gallery. I love the atmosphere you pulled off in this (which the background colour contributes to the intensity of the piece as it works a great contrast and compliment to the colours you chose in the foreground). The colouring job is fantastic and I love how you did the gold. I really could go on on this wonderful artwork, but I'll stop. Though there are some other [smaller] things that could be changed I believe they are easily overlooked. What you should be more concerned about is making this look more like a ballet than an interpretive dance. Other than that this is absolutely amazing and I hope you don't mind, but it's about to be fav-ed. <3 (Psst! I only went so far because of your "Advanced Critique" setting. Please understand I say all this in love and only to help you out. I hope you don't take any offense as I meant none.) -- Je t'aime beaucoup! きこえますか? Much love. ur welcome
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